Blog update: Time for a new book!

Oh, hi. Remember me?

I don’t even know where the last few months have gone. I hope they’ve been great for you, lots of happy family memories, career goals achieved, maybe a long lost relative appearing from nowhere and presenting you with a ridiculously enormous family fortune. That would be pretty sweet.

What have I been doing? Writing. Always writing… and as you know…

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My latest book, Veil of the Corrupter, was released in April and I have been overwhelmed with the response I’ve received from readers. Thank you so much to all those who purchased a copy or took the time to read and review an ARC. You have no idea how much your support means to me.

Veil was such a fun book to write and now it’s time to get to work on the 3rd book in the Ardentia series. The Light of Mytis is underway with a synopsis and cover ready in a couple of months.

I am also writing some Ardentia novellas which is exciting. The first will focus on the character, Sylviette, and will centre around the events that caused her to leave Narcea and also her fateful meeting with Myole.

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I know. You can’t wait. These novellas will be free on my blog.

I also have a side project. Do you like the paranormal?

Do you like romance?

Do you like… PARANORMAL ROMANCE!!??!

Then I may have a treat for you. I’ve been curious about Wattpad for sometime now, and with paranormal romance being quite a saturated market, I thought it might be fun to use Wattpad as a place for my own addition to the genre.

This is a work in progress, and I’ll be putting up a new chapter each week. When it’s all done, I’ll pull it down and give it an edit and a look over, so be sure to check in each week to see if it’s up your alley.

Please be aware that unlike the Ardentia series, this is more adult-ish.

Check the deets, yo

Click here to read Here After by J.L. Tomlinson via Wattpad.com

When Nick loses Karen, the life they had planned suddenly becomes a painful memory.

Each day is a struggle as he goes through the motions to live some sort of semblance of a life without her, attending medical school and indulging friends and family who tell him it’s time to move on.

A chance meeting reintroduces him to Sam, the odd lilac haired girl who frequents the cemetery and always says the wrong thing. Sam can often be found talking to herself, which is worrisome considering she’s studying to be a doctor just like Nick. But Sam isn’t talking to herself, she’s speaking to those that linger, to spirits who walk between the veil of the living and the dead.

Nick’s logical mind tells him that such a thing is insane, that is until Sam reveals her newest ghostly acquaintance is Karen.

As Nick delves deeper into the unnatural and unsettling world that Sam endures daily, he will question if a broken heart can ever truly be healed and if true love really can transcend the here and the here after.

Calling all Beta Readers

For future books, I am wanting to put together a group of beta readers for feedback on my novels. If you’re a fan of my writing and would like to be be a part of this beta group, please send me an email at jotomlinsontales@gmail.com.

Beta readers will be the first to read my books in their edited draft form and receive delicious swag such as paperbacks and lollipops.

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and now for…

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What am I totally obsessed with you may ask.

VIKINGS OMGWTFYESYESYES VIKINGS!!?!??!?!1111??

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It’s just gah, crazy good. Why does it always take me so long to get on the bandwagon of something awesome?

Yes, I’m talking to you gangnam style…

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Anyways. Vikings is fan-friggin-tastic. The writing is great, the cinematography is great, the costumes are great, and oh yes TRAVIS FIMMEL IS MAGNIFICENT. Let’s get past the fact that the man is beautiful. You know how I feel about beards. His portrayal of Ragnar is superb. It is so delicate and subtle, he is absolutely mesmerising. Watch it now. It’s just so good.

End of update.

Countdown To Veil – Oh The Excitement!!!!??!!!!

I’ve been the worst blogger. I know. My legions (or handful, give or take) of loyal readers have gone full-on crazy in my absence no doubt.

The good news is, I’ve been busy WRITING which is what this blog is all about.

The bad news? I have a severe KitKat addiction. They are amazeballs.

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The big news of the day is of course…

Veil of the Corrupter releases in four weeks!!!!

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Read an excerpt here.

Veil has more action, more danger, more excitement but still with the same low calories. That means you can read Veil guilt free!

And for those who haven’t started their journey into Ardentia yet (yeah, you in the back with the chips), The Empyrean Key is 99c at various online retailers. Find the links here!

Veil of the Corrupter is getting some great early reviews. The amazing blogger, Sparrowhawk, has posted her review of the advanced reading copy she received and in true Sparrowhawk form, it was amazingly detailed and beautifully presented. She also gave Veil 5 STARS which is an added bonus. Check it out here!

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I have another giveaway going on Goodreads. This is for an autographed paperback of Veil of the Corrupter. Go enter!

Goodreads Giveaway – Open Internationally –
One signed paperback of Veil of the Corrupter

Time to start work on the third book in the Ardentia series, as well as a couple of other projects I have on the side.

Be sure to spread the word, get more people reading The Empyrean Key and be sure to pre-order Veil of the Corrupter!

New Year. New Look. New Book.

Happy New Year, one and all.

I tell you what, getting back into the blogging groove was harder than expected. I had the most amazing three week holiday where after a hectic year, I was at last able to spend some quality time with my super awesome family.

Did I drink? Yes. Was I merry? Yes. Did I eat? Oh yes. I ate a lot. But I don’t care if I got some extra junk in this trunk, I got a man *snap fingers*.

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Anyways. I have given the blog a bit of a makeover, so hopefully content will be easier to find and I’m happy to announce that the release date for Veil of the Corrupter has been set for April 3 2015.

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You can even pre-order from Amazon. Go on. Do it!

There will also be a paperback version ready upon release and further pre-order links from smashwords will be up in the coming weeks.

For all those waiting on ARCs, I will be emailing out ebooks January 31st and appreciate you taking the time to read and review Veil of the Corrupter before release. If you are a blogger or reviewer who may be interested in getting your sticky little hands on a copy, please get in touch. I would love to hear from you.

giveawayWith Veil only months away, there is no better time to grab yourself a copy of The Empyrean Key. I am currently giving away two autographed copies at Goodreads. You should enter!

Click here to see the Goodreads giveaway page!

Or if you haven’t yet started your journey through Ardentia and just can’t wait, you can always grab a paperback for $10 or the ebook for only 99c!

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I know. I can’t believe it either. 99c people. Click here for links to get yourself a copy!

And remember, word of mouth is the best promotion any author can hope for. If you enjoyed The Empyrean Key, please let people know and be sure to leave ratings and reviews. It means a lot and I appreciate every single one.

Now, are you excited to rejoin Jahna, Lilac, Silko and Arn? Who are you most looking forward to catching up with?

Time to get back to work!!!

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Starbucks dodge taxes but not my tastebuds… Worst title ever

I almost didn’t post this week. I’ve been super mega busy with editing Veil of the Corrupter and for anyone who hasn’t noticed, it’s friggin Christmas!!! Which means decorating, listening to Mariah’s “All I want for Christmas is you” on repeat and spending ridiculous amounts of money while my husband yells “Rabble Rabble!!!!” and tries to hide his wallet from me.

Little does he know I’ve put a lojack on it… I’m kidding! I have my own money, I’m an independent woman and all that…

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No but srsly I want his money to buy dancing santas…

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As you all know, Christmas makes me giddy.

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It also means that Starbucks have some new delicious themed drink. This year I tried the Peppermint Frappucino and I know some people hate Starbucks for ethical and economical reasons, but I just want my Christmas drink ok, leave me alone. I refuse to let you ruin my special holiday.

Anyways, for those who visit my little blog for book stuff, here are some fun facts you should know…

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I will be announcing the release date for Veil of the Corrupter at the end of December. It will be available for pre order through amazon on kindle and paperback, as well as smashwords and itunes.

Bloggers or reviewers who are interested in an E-ARC of Veil can send me a message. I would LOVE to hear from you!

I will giving away autographed copies of The Empyrean Key in paperback, both here and at goodreads.com, also at the end of December.

I am working on a new YA Fantasy book that is a loose retelling of Beauty and the Beast. I’m hoping to get the first draft nailed down in the new year.

And now for those who just looove my midweek motivators…. Guess what?

IT’S CHRISTMAS THEMED !!!!!!*FREAKOUT*!!!!!!

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EDIBLE: Pavlova – A Kiwi classic. It’s all meringue (Fun Fact: I never spell meringue right, I mean, that’s not what it sounds like; meringue, that doesn’t seem right. I bet the inventor spelled it wrong and everyone just went with it), whipped cream and fresh summer fruits like strawberries, grapes, kiwifruit and passionfruit. YUM. When this is on the table I feel like Christmas just exploded on my face! Wait. What?

VISUAL: This was tough because Christmas is not traditionally associated with hot dudes. Most guys in Christmas movies are dads who wear festive jumpers and a good pair of slacks. Oh but wait. Die Hard is kind of a Christmas movie. It takes place during Christmas, and who’s in Die Hard? Bruce “Yipee-ki-yay Mother#@!!@*#” Willis that’s who! Rather than a festive jumper he struts about in a bloody wife-beater wielding a Beretta 92F. Awww yeah.

AUDIBLE: Mariah Carey is straight up cray-cray but when this song is on the radio you better move aside because Jo is about to RIP.IT.UP.

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Reveals, Giveaways and Pies… Oh My!

It’s been a busy week!

For those who missed it, I revealed the cover art for Veil of the Corrupter as well as a chapter excerpt to get you all worked up.

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Go take a look. Go on! Clickeeeeeeee!

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I also got the opportunity to be interviewed by the deliciously wonderful Sparrowhawk on her gorgeous blog. You should read this too!

As well as bedazzling you with insights into that age old question; who is Jo? She is also hosting a giveaway of gigantic proportions!!!!

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One lucky winner will take away a signed paperback edition of The Empyrean Key while a second winner will get an E-ARC of Veil of The Corrupter. This is open to international entries.

I know you’re all like, “Hey. Jo. Did I just hear you right? We can win all that slick loot?”

Yes. Yes you can. Enter Here!!!!

You can do things like following me or Sparrowhawk on facebook or twitter for additional entries, which is something you should be doing already! How else will you know what I had for lunch today? (SPOILER: It was a steak and cheese pie)

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So this is a new feature I’m trying out.

I have spent quite a bit of time with the characters of Ardentia and sometimes I like to dream about who might play them if the books were a movie.

So in my first segment, let’s look at the tempestuous Princess Mydra Dubraycon, inheritor of her father’s name.

I’ve picked british actress, Anna Popplewell who was Susan in The Chronicles of Narnia film series. Any thoughts?

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Only a couple more weeks to Christmas, my favourite time of year!

Brace yourselves for many, many, many Christmas themed posts to come!!!!!

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Veil of the Corrupter – Cover Reveal

I’m super psyched to share with you the cover design and excerpt for Veil of the Corrupter, the second book in the Ardentia series.

I absolutely love this cover. Where The Empyrean Key introduced you to Ardentia, Veil of the Corrupter delves deeper into the legends and mythology of the world and throws our beloved characters in the thick of it.

This cover is darker then Empyrean Key simply because the story gets darker. Jahna had a taste of danger in the first book but this time around it will become an unfortunate regularity on her quest for the Key.

The excerpt is taken from a great action scene early in the book that was a lot of fun to write. I hope it gets you excited for what’s to come…

Enjoy!

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Veil of the Corrupter – Excerpt

Sunlight, soft and hazy, shone down upon a small clearing. As they approached, dirt gave way to cracked stone and in the centre of the clearing stood a statue of Fressia, Guardian of the Overgrowth, with snaking vines for hair and skin made green by moss.

Jahna had never seen a Celestial idol in such disarray. She was marred with dirt and overrun with the growth of the forest. Some would consider it blasphemy to have her so uncared for, but people clearly feared the forest more than the deity’s wrath.

Lilac crouched down to wipe away the dirt that masked the talisman of Fressia, etched into the statues base; a single heart-shaped leaf, encircled by a wreath of flowering vines. Lilac looked up at the statue, paying particular attention to Fressia’s penetrating stone eyes.

Do you reckon it’s true? That Celestials watch us through their statues?”

Silko nodded. “Even the Vessels, or so legend says.”

The Vessels?” Jahna asked. “In Kalavar?”

Silko nodded. “Yes, why?”

Jahna pulled Arn’s coat from his back and quickly threw it over the head of Fressia, covering her eyes. Silko, Lilac and Arn looked at each other with similar puzzlement.

I wish to avoid prying eyes, especially those in Kalavar. Legend or not.”

Arn frowned. “I liked that coat.”

Jahna ignored his woe. “Let’s keep moving.”

They put the clearing behind them and Arn jogged to be beside Silko, putting an arm around him.

So. Silko. What is it in Kalavar that has our Jahna so distressed?”

Our, Jahna?” Silko sighed with a raised eyebrow. “I think if she wanted you to know, she would tell you herself.”

But she seems so busy and I hate to trouble her. Besides! I thought you and I were such firm friends!”

Jahna is firmer,” Silko replied.

Arn smirked and shot Jahna an inappropriate glance. “That she is.”

Shall I get you lot some tea and sweets to enjoy with your chit chat?” Jahna snapped. “Keep it down. If there is something in this forest, I don’t want to catch its attention.”

Have you noticed that when she’s mad, her eyes get all big and her nostrils quiver?” Arn asked.

She never looked that way until you came along,” Lilac grumbled.

Each step they took sunk into mounds of rotten leaves atop moist dirt. The undergrowth crunched beneath their boots and aside from that awful sporadic cackle, their movements were the only sound in the forest.

What is that?” Lilac grunted, her eyes scanning the trees as the cackle echoed from the north.

It sounds like a bird,” Silko replied.

No bird I’ve ever heard,” Arn breathed.

Jahna saw the anxious tremble in each of her companions. It stirred in her too, but she did her best to hide it. She needed them to be brave, even if they had to pretend. Jahna smiled and gripped Silko’s hand, pulling him tightly to her side.

Everything will be fine. Lilac’s axe can take care of any trouble there might be.”

Silko remained unconvinced.

Did you forget why we’re here?” he whispered in Jahna’s ear. “If there is a fallen Celestial in this forest, then I think we will need more than Lil’s axe.”

Suddenly there was movement amongst the trees. Jahna saw the blur of fleeting shadows from the corner of her eye, but when she turned, there was nothing. Not even a broken twig or rustled leaf. Just the dark of Tresconset; polluted with ill will and sour smells.

Jahna gulped, her eyes watching the forest intently.

Why don’t you tell us a story, Silko?”

Silko nodded, gathering his thoughts. “There is the tale of King Mywen who commanded that the forest be burnt to the ground to ease the people’s fears. They came with hundreds of men who carried hundreds of torches, but the forest consumed and extinguished every flame. During the reign of King Mywen his greatest battle was the Seething of Tresconset, a battle he lost. It is written that after his defeat, King Mywen said Ardentia would run out of fire before a flame would sear a branch in Tresconset.”

Arn frowned as he stepped lithely over the growth. “That’s comforting. Maybe you could tell us a story that’s a little more upbeat. Possibly something with rainbows and kittens.”

Before Silko could speak, that horrid cackle pierced the air once more.

This time though it was closer; much closer.

The shadows returned, weaving in and out of the trees and moving faster than Jahna’s eyes could track.

The companions stood with backs together.

There’s something out there, Jahna,” Lilac said.

Jahna shivered and mustered her courage. “I know. And I don’t think it’s a bird.”

Arn reached to his belt and there tucked away beneath his hanging shirt were two silver daggers. He held them out to either side of his body, gripping the pearl handles in his gloved hands.

You’ve been carrying those since Crushell?” Jahna asked.

A Maddroff is nothing without his blades,” Arn breathed. His focus was on the forest and his intense bearing consoled her wavering nerves.

Lilac rolled her eyes and pulled her axe from its strapping across her back. The entire haft was wooden and carved with a deep spiral groove. The double headed blade was flawless silver and set with ornate filigree designs. Lilac gripped the handle, taking a moment to admire her beautifully brutal weapon.

Just stand back, alright?” she called to Arn. “I’ll take care of whatever beasty is out there. Your mother can use those little things to cut up your meat and veges for dinner when I’m done.”

Quiet!” Jahna snapped. “Over there.”

The companions fell silent, watching and waiting for the shadows of the forest to make themselves known. There was the resounding crack of a nearby branch; then another; and another, but no matter which direction they looked, nothing could be seen. Jahna couldn’t keep track of her heartbeat, its rapid speed matched by the shallow breaths escaping her trembling lips.

And then she heard it; a murmur; a dry gasp and finally a hot breath down her neck. A droplet of thick, mucousy muck fell from above, landing on her shoulder and sliding down the leather of her tunic.

Jahna had to fight the voice in her head, screaming at her to not look up. She lifted her chin so slowly that it seemed to barely move at all and found herself looking into a pair of bright yellow eyes, protruding from a face that was almost human.

The grotesque creature hung from the tree branch above by its birdlike feet and its body was cocooned in large, ochre feathered wings. Its hair was a dark matted mess and its stone-grey skin was smeared with thick filth. It held Jahna tightly in its gaze then opened its mouth of rotten teeth, unleashing the shrill cackle that had been following them through the forest.

Jahna had seen enough. She grabbed Silko and began to run just as the creature unfurled its wings and lunged for her with bony arms and razor-sharp talons.

Run!” she yelled to Lilac and Arn.

They ran through the forest, throwing aside hanging branches and leaping over fallen trees. Jahna didn’t know she could run so fast. She had never had such a good reason to try. She looked over her shoulder, hoping to not see that horrible thing close behind them.

It was gone.

Jahna slowed her pace as the others ran on. “I can’t see it.”

That’s a good thing!” Arn yelled, skidding to a halt. “Now keep running! Let’s get out of here!”

No,I came here for something and I can’t leave without it.”

Are you crazy? Did you see that thing?”

What’s wrong, Fingers? You scared?” Lilac scoffed.

Arn’s face was set. “I’m no coward and I am more than happy to bleed any man who thinks me to be one. But, Jahna… that was no man.”

There was a rustle and a crash from the trees above and the creature fell heavily before Arn, landing crouched on its feet and stirring up a cloud of debris and feathers. It rose slowly to stand tall, arching its back and unveiling its wings one at a time. Its body was emaciated, caked in mud and it made short, stuttered movements as a bird would.

Get out of here!” Arn yelled to the others. His mouth curled into an impish grin. “This won’t take but a moment.”

Suddenly there was another loud crash followed by that awful cackle and when the dirt had settled Arn now found himself faced with two more creatures, just as hideous and contentious.

Arn exhaled and spun his daggers in the palms of his hands. “I may need more time.”

The creatures shrieked as they lunged forward, swiping at him with their claws. Arn deftly dodged each attack, bending and rolling his body before turning his blades and plunging the left into the ochre creatures shoulder, then the right into its gut.

He grunted as he pushed the daggers deep into the creature’s flesh, twisting them inside and watching as a putrid black oil seeped from the wounds.

It fell to the ground in racking convulsions, the sounds it made far worse than the cackle. Its agony only briefly held the attention of the other two. They began to circle Arn who stood with his blackened daggers at the ready.

Arn!” Jahna yelled running towards him. “Lilac, do something!”

Lilac nodded and charged in with her axe held high, only to be slapped in the face with a raven wing and thrown several metres across the forest, her body impacting hard against a tree. Jahna hurried to help, taking up a thick branch and swinging it madly at the raven winged creature, but it evaded Jahna’s every strike.

The second creature, with wild orange hair, swooped upon Arn, but he was ready for it, slicing his dagger through the soft skin of its belly and opening it up. Rather than falling like its brethren, this one grew more furious with its pain.

It took swipes at Arn’s face and slashed at his chest, tearing his shirt and cutting deeply into his skin. Arn flinched but despite the pain he spun around, dropped to his knees and moved to plunge both his daggers into its legs.

The creature beat its wings, rising into the air and hovering just out of Arn’s reach. It lashed out with taloned feet, slashing Arn’s forearms and wrists until he could no longer grasp his daggers and they slipped to the ground.

Like a tornado of bone and feathers, the creature spun furiously towards Arn. With eyes wide, he tried to clamber to his feet, but the beast was already upon him, landing a crushing blow across his jaw.

Arn staggered, and as he began to fall, the creature scooped him up into its arms, running with lightning speed and vanishing into the depths of the forest.

Arn!” Jahna cried.

She went to give chase but the raven winged creature would not allow her to pass, blocking her every attempt to escape.

Lilac stumbled to her feet, taking a moment to focus on her surroundings. She collected her axe and labouringly charged at the creature, smacking it across the face with the haft. The creature took flight, striking at her from the air with those vicious talons, slashing and slicing her face to shreds until she was blinded by her own blood.

Silko bit his lip and clenched his fists, finding all the courage he could. Jahna was too slow to grab him before he ran at the creature, only to be buffeted away by its wings and mocked by its cackles.

Jahna saw Arn’s daggers lying in the dirt. She took them in her hands, slashing at whatever she could hit and with luck found a thin layer of skin under its wing.

The creature screamed as it fell to the ground and Jahna took a steadying breath as she straddled its thrashing body. She raised one of the daggers above its heart and braced herself to end its miserable life.

Her breath ceased as she was overcome with searing agony. The ochre creature they’d taken for dead was now hovering above her with its talons buried deep into the flesh of her shoulders. She released a tear filled wail.

Jahna had never felt such excruciating pain and it only intensified as she struggled. The daggers fell from her hands and she could feel her skin tearing under her own weight as the creature flew higher.

Blood flowed thick from her wounds, trickling down her arms and dripping from her fingertips to the forest floor metres below. The world began to blur, black spots clouded her vision and just when she thought she would pass out, the creature dropped her and she landed with a sickening thud.

The creature leaned over her and put its claws to her throat, ready to rip it out. Jahna turned her head, her eyes slowly beginning to close.

A roar filled the forest followed by thunderous strides that she swore could be felt through the very earth beneath her. Something was coming. Large and fast, it burst from the gloom of the wood.

There was a blinding flash of silver light and she watched weakly as the head of the ochre creature fell from its neck and landed beside her, its yellow eyes still wide open. There was a charge from the raven winged creature, but it was dispatched just as quickly, the silver flash bursting through its chest and shattering its spine.

Then silence at last. Horrible silence.

Jahna knew as she lay there that she should be scared, but as she dazed in and out of consciousness, she could not find the strength to focus on any one emotion. Soon the figure was beside her and she felt a strong hand lift her head.

A voice, deep and rumbling, spoke. “Keep your strength, girl. I have you.”

Add Veil of the Corrupter to your Goodreads and keep an eye out for the early 2015 release date which I’ll be posting in the next couple of weeks.

On a side note, The Empyrean Key is now available in paperback for anyone who loves hardcopy. I will be doing a giveaway of a free autographed copy soon, so follow my blog or you might miss out!

A lot of work goes into a book, especially when you have a day job! So I would like to thank everyone who supports me and those who have fallen in love with the world and characters I have created.

Now I can’t have a post without at least one gif so…

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They like me! They really like me!

Hey. How are you? That’s great. I’m fine too. Now that we have gotten the niceties out of the way I can do this.

Squeeeeeeeee!!! Zomgomgwtflolololol!!!!!!!!!!!!

giphy I got such cool news this week! I entered SpecFicNz‘s Halloween Flash Fiction competition and

Dun-dun-da-dun!!!! Winner Winner Chicken Dinner!!!!

200-2 Knowing that I was competing against other great New Zealand writers gives me massive happies!!!! Flash Fiction is a really fun medium. You have a 500 word limit and you know what? 500 words isn’t a lot at all. It was a great challenge. So without further adieu…..

The One by Jo Tomlinson

Craig was the one. I knew it straight away, from the moment I saw him. He was handsome, but handsome wasn’t special, and Craig was so much more than that. He had golden curls and big blue eyes flecked with grey. I’d been hesitant when he’d first approached me in the bar that Halloween. My last relationship hadn’t ended well. He had promised so much and delivered so little. I’d spent twelve months thinking that it could go somewhere, that finally I had met the man who could make me happy. Instead he hurt me. A lot. I have the scars to prove it. I was in no hurry to risk myself again. But then in walked Craig. I couldn’t look him in the eyes without smiling. I was terrible at playing hard to get. I kept my chin against my chest. I read the drinks menu over and over, anything to avoid those eyes. Eventually I gave in. I looked at him and I might as well have given him my heart then and there. I knew I wanted his. He made me feel something no other man had. Hope. I was hopeful for my future. With Craig’s help, I could survive. Our time together was bliss, my adoration growing with each new day. I found out he went to church every Sunday and helped feed the homeless. We’d visited his family and his mother let slip that Craig had told them he loved me and asked for his grandmother’s wedding ring. He wanted to propose. I couldn’t believe it. Someone loved me. I tried not to smile on the drive home. I didn’t want to ruin his surprise. These last eleven months had made my decision easy. Craig was perfect. On Halloween night, twelve months since we’d met, we drove to a beach and parked on the dunes. He was getting nervous and fiddling with something in his pocket. This was it! Before he could say a word I reached into my bag and grabbed the ceremonial dagger of my forefathers. The silver of the blade flashed in the moonlight and reflected in his eyes as I straddled him and plunged the steel into his chest. Blood erupted from the wound, splattering the windows and soaking my face in a crimson mask. He screamed but no one would hear him here. That is why I recommended this spot. He didn’t put up much of a fight either. The last man scratched and punched. I was happy not to be hurt again. Craig whimpered for awhile, but was quiet by the time I’d finished cutting out his heart. I’d waited twelve months for this, to feast on that kind, sweet heart and as I gorged myself I could feel the power swelling within me. The last man was tainted and impure. With Craig’s good heart I would live another hundred years. Craig was the one. I knew it straight away, from the moment I saw him.

And some great feedback from the judge, author Alan Baxter Alan Baxter: “This is one of those stories that very neatly subverts your expectations. All along I was expecting the perfect man to turn out as anything but, then boom! Plot twist. It’s very neatly done and is an excellent use of the flash fiction medium.” It’s put me in a pretty peppy mood. 200-1 The cover reveal for Veil of the Corrupter is Sunday 30 November. I’ll also put up an excerpt to get you giddy. Be sure to add Veil to your Goodreads list. If you enjoy my blog make sure to follow me by email so you get alerts when I post. You wouldn’t want to miss anything would you? Everyone at school would be talking about this amazing post they read last night and you would be all lame and left out because you didn’t read it. They would point at you. There could be laughing. Someone might call you a dumb-wad. I’m just trying to save you from all that. You can follow via email on the bar to your left.